These first 10 sentences are from ONE website! As you edit, don’t forget my…enthusiasm…for sentences with more than one mistake in them.
1) We have design immersive environments for clients such as Getty Images, ADOBE, Microsoft, BMI, Ford to name a few.
(That was on the homepage.)
2) XYZ, president and founder of ABC, is as an entertainment industry connector at the intersection of content and technology.
(That was on the founder’s bio!)
3) Later on, in a visionary role, he directed Qwest Communications to leverage the power of the rising internet and launch Qwest “anywhere anytime” digital media and entertainment practice signing up major record companies, TV networks, and media organizations including NBC, CBS, EMI, Sony as well as sports’ teams like the Giants.
(So was that!)
4) A trusted advisor to the media and entertainment industry, he presides over several media and entertainment think-tank and produces executive briefings summits for a selected group of media and tech executives.
(And that!)
5) He is currently an associate member of NARAS (Grammys.) and a member of the Austin Chamber of Commerce.
(And that!)
6) We have our feet on the ground in every major markets as well as participate in global conferences such as Midem, MIPTV, MIPCOM, NAB, Asia TV Forum, NATPE, CES, Music Matters Asia and selected industry seminars and summits.
7) We provide business development, marketing, around conferences – ShowPLUS – and one-on-one meetings with c-level executives
8) With over a decade of experience in trade-show management, our team will provide your with an an added-value package within your budget, with premium visibility and a superb ROI.
9) Your target market – we mine the database and and match it with our 2000+ VIP listing, make introductions and facilitate one-on-one meetings.
10) Please contact us so we have the opportunity to go in great details on how we add value and that can benefit your company.
Whew, enough from that site! Imagine hiring that team! Here are some more gems from assorted “professionals.”
11) Drawn to the area to study art at UMass, she sites both the thriving artistic community and the affordable cost of living as her reason for not moving to a more traditional art hub like NYC after graduation.
12) If you would like to register to receive the GrammarTip newsletter by e-mail, fill in your email address in the box to the left.
13) This is the most important thing about the list: Don’t write down things you *want* to do next week, right down what you *will do* next week.
14) Dr Sanjay Khurana, a spinal surgeon, told NBC4 he “did a brief exam and smelled the fuel and didn’t want it to ignite”.
15) Paramedics found Ford to be “alert and conscious” and suffering “moderate trauma”, Patrick Butler, the Los Angeles assistant fire chief, told a press conference at the scene.
16) In fact, the father of our country, George Washington, at one time also felt very disappointed in the direction of our newly-formed nation and was not afraid to state it.
17) As a provider of the world’s finest aligator goods we are happy to recieve your feedback and answer any questions you may have.
18) Your Advanced Plan is comprised of six elements and is offered at no additional charge to you.
19) The marketing team are very proud that they have helped so many clients achieve amazing results through implementing an inbound marketing approach.
20) A big idea is a simple and concise visual motif that says everything that need be said.
21) The YEC is an invite-only organization comprised of the world’s most promising young entrepreneurs.
22) For check payments or to receive an invoice or purchase order, please call 888-602-3270 or e-mail is at [email protected].
23) ABC, global online marketing manager, now uses our software everyday.
24) They leverage their clients scheduled events to attract visitors to the client’s website.
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