Please don’t tout your bona fides as a “thought leader” and “visionary” and then string together two sentences like these:
Our team is comprised of thoughtful, hard-working individuals, but we know we’re not perfect. Here’s what we’re working on everyday to deliver a better experience to our clients.
Oh, so you’re “comprised of,” are you? Wow, that’s so ungrammatical! And then there’s the misspelled word in the second sentence. A company that writes this kind of prose has zero credibility in my book. Zero.
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