Most of these sentences are from “website developers”; in other words, companies that are paid to write for other businesses. In my experience, most internet content writers can’t write their way out of a paper sack and are largely clueless about basic punctuation and grammar. Bad writing, ignorant writing, sloppy writing…with you paying for it!
If you are shopping for a web developer, be picky. Before hiring a company, take a hard look at the writing on that business’s website; the writing there is going to be reflected on your site!
1) People get hundreds of e-mails a day, and you’re sending them one in the entire month, you and your brand are lost.
2) This is a co-sponsored event with Student Alumni Board and allows current student and alumnae to visit and network.
3) This 7 day course is only the beginning.
4) If you choose not to utilize one of the pieces, your outcome – your growth in your community might not be as fast or as high.
5) The two hours, at your discretion, that you can use for changes to your website. If you do not use it, the hours go away.
6) Why? Because we ask questions. Lot of them.
7) Unfortunately most of the jewelry from this time period has been lost or melted down over the years, please don’t miss your chance to own this special piece of history!
8) Amazing Visuals: A business website is more about how it looks. We load websites with some amazing graphics/pictures to get visitors attention and so that it compels users to learn more about your business.
SEO- friendly: Your business contains essential meta-tags that help Google recognize your website and the industry you operate in to show it relevant visitors.
PayPal Integration: Business websites with PayPal provide easy payment option to their customers.
9) It is not necessary to have an invitation to visit a chapter, however it is best to contact the president of the chapter prior to the visit.
10) Search the map using a region, city, zip code, state name or abbreviation (e.g. Sarasota, FL).
11) Sunshine Web Marketing is a Sarasota, Florida based internet marketing company serving the entire suncoast.
12) Our Sarasota based firm will design you a WordPress website or blog to fit both your needs and your budget.
13) What is happening, who’s fault is it and how do you fix it?
14) 4 things clients say that cause web professional’s frustration:
15) In fact, as she tells “Oprah: Where Are They Now?”, she still refuses to refer to Simpson as anything other than “the killer.”
16) Dr. X is a two-time international award-winning author, an internationally-recognized speaker, and subject matter expert in the field of personal development.
17) His passion for teaching and positively impacting peoples lives has been recognized globally.
18) As we all know, professional athletes, movie stars, business managers, CEOs, and world political leaders use coaches because they pinpoint the limitations that are holding them back from achieving the success that they seek.
19) If you have heard a deep “sigh” while discussing your project chances are you have made one or more of the following errors.
20) As the automobile made the horse and carriage obsolete; solar, wind and robots will disrupt our view of energy.
21) This is for those of you that would like to maintain your own blog, website or facebook page. Instruction can be by the individual project, such as posting new pictures, or it can be an intensive study of Facebook ads, either way we can assist you.
These last two sentences came from a fellow who claims to have been a copywriter for 30 years.
22) My apologies if some of the verbiage “rubs you the wrong way”.
23) Simple tell them… “My PR guys are on it!”
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